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I need help in writing my personal statement seeking a post graduate degree in law. Language help: Grammer, spelling, word choice, creative writing. Technical: - up to 850 words. - It should explain why you want to study law at xxx Law School and emphasise any aspect of your personal history that may enhance your application, -including extra-curricular activity, -community involvement, -work experience, -caregiver responsibilities, -relevant personal characteristics and any outstanding achievements. In particular, the selection committee wants to know what has motivated you to undertake law studies. I will not accept "sloppy" jobs. You must know I will pass the final project to a professor whose time is too valuable for a preliminary editing level.