I proofread the 'normal' piece. Working on the bad one may take more time, as the line of thought is most sentences aren't properly articulated. The edited piece is below
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The history of Spain is very interesting, considering the fact that people of different cultures and customs once lived there. Swords of Toledo saw to the rise in fame of this part of Spain.
Spain has marvelous sandy beaches, breathtaking mountain ranges, beautiful landscapes, as well as museums and monuments of much importance to it. It is also home to Mount Pyrenees and Montserrat volcanoes, which has long being inactive.
Ibiza is paradise and so is Granada, Seville and Cordoba. You can't miss an opportunity to cycle through the wine country of La Rioja; you can even stop and taste some wine here to spice up your adventure. This popular coast overlooks the sea of Cantabrian with the wondrous Pyrenees mountain stands behind it.
Spain is the perfect place to have the much-needed holiday or vacation you have been longing to have.
The most interesting thing about Spain is her varying weather conditions. Whereas some area are very dry, others are wet and productive. The climate is very kind, and you will have a taste of different Spanish cuisines. All you need do is choose the right place that suits your needs perfectly.