Edit Product Walthrough Audio Script from the perspective of an American Health Consumer

We need you to edit the audio script for the Story Board for an online consumer health product concept demo to be created in Flash. Number of words in the script is about 1050. We expect the demo to be between 10-15 min, some parts being played optionally. The audio script is already written, but we need it to be refined a. Keeping the story in line with the sensibilities of a typical US consumer b. Keeping the language, tone and style consistent and congruent with the tastes of senior management in the age group 40-50 in the US corporate (IT and Health) c. Reflecting the instructions for the voice over artist You need to understand the concept from the storyboard and we will need you to sign an NDA before beginning with the project. The NDA will be outside of the Freelancer System. • You must have a very strong command over the language • You must be a resident in the USA • You must share samples of past audio script for product demos Here is a reference for you to understand the kind of demo we are creating [login to view URL] [login to view URL] Please apply only after looking at the above videos. Otherwise the bid will be rejected.