DealBase project for Laura M. 1(repost)

Laura, This is Sam Shank formerly of TravelPost.com. I'm now working on [login to view URL] which is a travel deals site. We need some help editing deal descriptions, and I wanted to see if you are available and interested to start ASAP. I thought we could start with a small project of 100 deals to edit, and see how long this takes you and then we can better determine the right fee for a larger project. The instructions for how to edit the deals are included, and you'll edit them right on the [login to view URL] site. I've also included the links to the 100 deals. I expect each deal will take no more than 3 minutes to edit, so this project should take you about 5 hours max (which you can use for bidding the appropriate amount tied to your current desired hourly wage.) I look forward to working with you again! -sam ## Deliverables Instructions and example edited deal text: This project is to add consistency and uniqueness to the descriptions of hotel deals on the [login to view URL] site. Here are the edits you need to perform for the deals to edit them. Steps to edit 1. Remove and rewrite any overtly promotional information that indicates a biased point of view. Sometimes this will involve rewriting an entire section. Other times, it will involve removing a sentence and rewording another sentence. Use your best judgment. 2. Change to a 3rd person writing style (for example, change "your package includes" to "this package includes") Change instances of "our" (generally you want to change this to "the") 3. Perform 3-5 other word and sentence structure changes of your choice. 4. Never add or remove an item from the bulleted lists. 5. Leave any other formatting, such as the * which create bulleted lists and bolding. And leave the _ that create italics. (you'll only see this when you edit the deal.) 6. Throughout the edits, remember to keep the "facts" of the deal unchanged. Any edits you make should NEVER impact the facts of the deal. Here's an example of how this may work. Changes for each step are indicated in italics. Start with the deal description on [login to view URL]: Save 20% off regular rates and enjoy a fun-filled family vacation in Los Angeles with the American Express Family package. After a day of family fun, the kids will be delighted to receive cookies and milk at turndown each night. Your package includes: * Deluxe room accommodations * Milk and cookies at turndown * Omni Kids bag for each child at check-in 1. Remove and replace any overtly promotional information that indicates a biased point of view. Save 20% off regular rates with this Los Angeles American Express Family package. Your package includes: * Deluxe room accommodations * Milk and cookies at turndown * Omni Kids bag for each child at check-in * Breakfast for the entire family 2. Change to a 3rd person writing style (for example, change "your package includes" to "this package includes"). Change instances of "our" (generally you want to change this to "the") Save 20% off regular rates with this Los Angeles American Express Family package. This package includes: * Deluxe room accommodations * Milk and cookies at turndown * Omni Kids bag for each child at check-in * Breakfast for the entire family 3. Perform 3-5 other word and sentence structure changes of your choice. Save 20% off regular nightly rates with this Los Angeles American Express Family package. 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