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Second Entry

Hello sir, based on your feedback on my previous entry, here are a few changes that I made: - Changed the background to a sunny bright day so it doesn't look gloomy - Added some space between the man and the text - Made the button and the text bigger, also changed the color of the second part of the text - Removed the dust particle - Changed the flag to Italy. And for your information, the club doesn't exist in real life and I used a premium stock logo called "wild wolf" available for commercial use there. - Adjusted the shades on the hand so it looks less odd, but in case you still didn't like it I made an alternative pose for the man in the second picture. Let me know your thoughts on this, thank you!

Entri Kontes #23 untuk                                                Design homepage banner

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  • sudutkuning
    sudutkuning
    • 3 tahun yang lalu

    Alright sir thanks again, I'll submit another entry soon

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  • bofaleh
    Penyelenggara Kontes
    • 3 tahun yang lalu

    the text and box and box text needs to be more a life vibrant , maybe better coloring , and box bigger plz

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  • bofaleh
    Penyelenggara Kontes
    • 3 tahun yang lalu

    plz give me 2 versions, one same text another make (be a football hero - small text and first ) second ( and create your personalized card - bigger next )

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  • bofaleh
    Penyelenggara Kontes
    • 3 tahun yang lalu

    i think you must raise the person up, and raise the card also, since from down its cut, also if i chose your design i will give you our own card design to add it

    • 3 tahun yang lalu
  • bofaleh
    Penyelenggara Kontes
    • 3 tahun yang lalu

    the hand still looks strange, cant you find another person picture who his hand looks better

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  • bofaleh
    Penyelenggara Kontes
    • 3 tahun yang lalu

    now its looks better and brighter, needs extra touches,

    • 3 tahun yang lalu
  • bofaleh
    Penyelenggara Kontes
    • 3 tahun yang lalu

    thanks for reading the feedback, if i chose your design i will give you a direct project for you , to design another banner that a promise,

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