Short film is done just need some improvements

Main character which is a guy who looks at his reminders and sees he has a reminder set to tidy up his wardrobe, before he starts doing anything he looks outside and it looks quite dark and you can hear the thunder storm so he closes the blind and turns his light on, then he opens his wardrobe to start trying to clean it up a bit as he does he moves his hand through his clothes hanging and he sees a light getting brighter and brighter so he moves the clothes out the way and goes through and wakes up in a dark room where there is an object in a glass box so then he looks around and wants to grab it as he opens the glass box and is about to touch the object the whole room shakes, the object starts floating and different coloured lights come from the floor and side of the walls etc. this is the story in order Scene 1 have the main character walking towards the cupboard to see the sticky note/ reminder, then go upstairs look through the clothes and see the bright white light then transition into a whole white screen with some mysterious white noise. Next woken in the different room where the box is once he holds the ball it starts glowing, floating add lighting effects in the whole room too make it look magical at scene 1 also a short clip of the outside add sound effect and special effect of lighting last part is to make the character disspear as the whole room shakes