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Design 03

Here is the another version from me. I change the tail become a spinning color and make it like 3D, and detailize some little parts. Hope u like tis. Cheers. :)


                                                                                                            Entri Kontes #                                        28
                                     untuk                                        Clean up or re-design my website logo - The White Rabbit

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  • RFDS
    RFDS
    • 5 tahun yang lalu

    Sorry for the late...becos I no always online.
    For ur design, I have updated. You may check on the hangover section there.
    Cheers.

    • 5 tahun yang lalu
  • RFDS
    RFDS
    • 5 tahun yang lalu

    Hi Laptoprepai, thx for choosing me~:)

    • 5 tahun yang lalu
  • laptoprepai
    Penyelenggara Kontes
    • 5 tahun yang lalu

    Hi Rfds, I am choosing you as the winner since your design style is my preference. The issue I have with the squat body I believe is to do with the ears.. I think by just adding the yellow color further up may sort this look. I also think making the body shape something like this https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/77/10/83/7710834c23889c32c1fd1d6aa3625d15.jpg, maybe more pear shaped and I think this will be perfect.

    • 5 tahun yang lalu
  • laptoprepai
    Penyelenggara Kontes
    • 5 tahun yang lalu

    I really like your design. The points I have to make though are: 1. The rabbit looks kind of squashed, I'm not sure why.. perhaps it is the ears? If you look at other submissions they don't look as squashed. 2. The top of the hind legs seems a little too straight and I think having this more rounded would be better. 3. The tail colour scheme is very good and even though you have a very nice design for this I am thinking a less "water drop" design would be better, perhaps something like a new combination between this and your first design. 4. I would prefer a solid colour difference between the yellow and white in the ear as opposed to a gradient. Thank you!

    • 5 tahun yang lalu